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The Value of Values  [E]
I think of lessons learned in youth... A Poetic Traditions Entry
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

"The Value of Values" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!! Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!

This poem really reflects in our world today that most of our children do not have as much respect as we did as a child. I find myself very disappointed with this matter.

I really like the last stanza in your poem because you make a great point about respect in it.

I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. You make some great points with this poem too. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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