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Over the Line  [13+]
Too Far This Time
by ♥Hooves♥
Review of Over the Line  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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I can relate to this poem. I like the metaphor of the road and crossing the center line and our choices in life. I'm a good driver, but yet I still find myself crossing the line in life quite a lot. A well thought out poem that leaves room at the end for us to get it right...Next time. Lovely!


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I didn't notice anything.

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I can't rate this, but I enjoyed this poem. Good luck in the contest!

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