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 |  | Hooked  [13+] Cody's a bull rider with a decision to make: family or career A Flash Blog Contest Entry  |
| (5.0)| Hi Ken. Nixie, here. The read and review option brought me over to your 'corral'.   What struck me first was the cover art. Wow, what a perfect picture for this story. The title could have meant anything. The brief description sketched it out. I've known people who have to make decisions like that. I wondered what Cody would do. In the end, that wasn't the conflict as stated. His family sounded like they had no problem with his bull riding. 'Cowboy perfume' I like the smell of horses. trying to get [] caged behemoth into position. missing word? [the] No idea what [rosined] meant, and I couldn't find a definition that fit the theme. Maybe it's a rodeo word. I found [rosin] but that made no sense either. I've been to one rodeo, and judging from this story, written authentically, I think you've seen a few more. The descriptions rang true, but I'll admit to disappointment when Cody was disqualified. Just the same as in real life. We don't always succeed. The point is to keep going, and that's exactly what Cody planned on. So funny, the kids and mom running up to him. A delightful conclusion, even if the brief description didn't make sense to me. I thought maybe he'd call his wife, and she would be on the verge of leaving him. Oh well. What do I know? ~Nixie   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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