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 Truth  [E]
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by Jacky
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Jacky!
You know I'm a sucker for twisted/surprise endings, and you seem to the Queen of them! Especially as a FF professional!
I realize the main character in this is a little dinosaur, but this makes me wonder just how smart cave men really were. Could they have had just an inkling of how the universe worked/works, or did they even care?
Sorry, I digress. It did make me think though.
You did a great job of personifying little Pen, and to be honest, I really did think it would be a cave man who figured it out in the end! So you got me there!
I also like the happy and simple ending you gave to it. It even made ME happy! Not for my whole long life, but for a little bit, anyway!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and have a marvelous New Year and New Decade!

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