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Christmas Eve With Cats  [E]
I have finally completed my class assignment to write an anyimorphisim story!
by Itchybarn
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Itchy!
This is a nice, heartwarming tale for the Christmas season, and I apologize for not reviewing this sooner. It really was on my list!
I like how you wrote this in the first person as the kitten, James, and the idea of them plotting to see Sonta — sorry, SANTA! *Laugh* — only to find out that he wanted to take them all over the world delivering presents was a great concept!
For a children's story, I thought it was very well told. You did a good job with describing each one of the kittens, even going into detail about their character and personalities (shy, black with big, round eyes, mysterious). The spelling and grammar were also good, and it's very deserving of that award.
My only suggestion would be to double space the paragraphs. The way it is now makes it look all 'scrunched up', if you know what I mean.
Otherwise, BRAVO!
Keep on writing on, Itchy! Thanks for sharing this, and I hope you and your family have a wonderful New Year and a phenomenal New Decade!

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