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Tea Time  [13+]
Twisted tea time. Draft short story beginning. Feedback welcome and appreciated.
by Greg M
Review of Tea Time  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Tea Time"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

The beautiful Fine white China pot caught my attention. This is a good start of a detective story. I appreciate the suspense of this story. I can imagine the scene perfectly. The descriptions and the plots are so good. I think you can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be interesting.

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