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 This is the UFO.  [E]
We are glad to announce recruitment on Planet earth, please read this info item.
by NOBODYLEARNS
Review of This is the UFO.  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello there, NOBODYLEARNS!
For your first piece on here, this isn't bad. I can't say it's actually a story per se, but I like the concept of the UFO recruiting people to fight their enemies, whoever they might be. They don't go into too much detail, but I guess the recruits will get all that info when they sign on the dotted line, eh?
I'm not sure if you really need that disclaimer though, but better safe than sorry, right? *Laugh*
Great spelling and grammar, but I did spot one tiny niggle (sorry to be so picky!):
'United (f)ederations of Outerspace. (federation should be capitalized)
Otherwise, good job! I like your sense of humor!
Kee ponw ritin gon, NOBODYLEARNS, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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