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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Bulletg*TITLE:This is good tribute for APJ Abdul Kalam who was a scientist and politician. I like the way you put into words how special he was to us.

The title fits this poem.

*Bulletg*POEM: This is a wonderful idea. I love the way you combined words to describe his life. The poem capture the memories of APJ Abdul Kalam. It makes the readers to understand who this famous man was.

*Butterfly2B* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone I found is cheerful and soothing.

*Bulletg* Favorite: I especially love the way you ended the lines
“Science and learning works your mind ; the brain needs exercise too
So I thank God for scientists , for scientific minds
That help to illuminate and enlighten this world, for me and you “

*Bulletg* THEME: I like the theme.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed this poem.


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