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Hi, Dragonwoman!
This is good. I like the premise of this murder taking place in a home for blind people, but the ending seemed a little ambiguous to me. I know there other ways of 'seeing', but I don't see (no pun intended) how or what other sense they could have. Hence, why did the doctor go silent?
Unless...
He was the one who perpetrated this vile crime?
(")What is this place?(") (")Says Blunt Residence,” said the one named Jones.
“It seems to be, but we have a problem.(")
"Nobody saw anything!” (we talked about this earlier today--if the same character is speaking, then you don't need closing quotation marks, although this shouldn't be separate paragraphs)
For a mini-mystery flash fiction piece, this turned out pretty good, once I figured it out! *Headbang*
Or did I?
Kee ponw ritin gon, DW! Good luck in the contest, and have a fantastic day/evening/tomorrow!

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