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Greetings, Smart Debroy!
For your first piece on here, this isn't bad. It's nice, informative and educational piece about self-awareness and keeping our lives on a straight path. At least that's what I got from it. If we let ourselves get distracted from where we want to go, then we might not ever get to our intended destination.
And now that I'm getting up there in life (I'll be 55 in June *Shock2*), it's probably about time I took these words of wisdom and applied them! I'm running out of time and I should be focused on my real goal(s)!
Great spelling and grammar, but I did spot a couple of tiny niggles (sorry to be so picky, but spelling and grammar are pet peeves of mine!):
'we need to adopt this these ever variable issues'
'an perfect Epic' (a)
Kee ponw ritin gon, Smart Debroy, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
PSSS-You now have your 1st fan! *Bigsmile*
PSSSS-Just out of curiosity, why did you fan ME?

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