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 Prompt 1 Day 1  [E]
The beginnings of using my new writing prompts book. Sorry if I'm not that good.
by Ponylover177
Review of Prompt 1 Day 1  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi there, Ponylover!
For your 1st piece on here, this isn't bad. It's pretty short, but not short enough that we don't know what's going on. Siblings, especially if they're spread out in age, do indeed have contempt for one another, and you did an nice job showing that here. You didn't say how old each one is, but I'm guessing that they're ALL a bit childish to a degree!
Great spelling and grammar, and nice use of the question prompt!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Ponylover, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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