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 Santa Speaks  [ASR]
My Dialogue 500 entry for the week of Dec. 14th
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Review of Santa Speaks  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I like this story written for a contest (Dialogue 500). Dialogues are flowed beautifully. It seems you wrote it for Christmas and you managed it well. I learned that description gives story the life it needs. But I can imagine the scene where they are. The way you wrote keeps me reading it to the end.

Thanks for sharing!!
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