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Mum was Cranky  [ASR]
Billy and Neville get up to mischief. Winner of Daily Flash Fiction Contest 01/04/2020.
by Greg M
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello there, Greg M!
Saw this in The "Short Stories Newsletter (January 15, 2020)"  and had to check it out!
This is really good, and I can see why it won the Daily FF Contest. Congratulations!
I wasn't sure where this was going at first. Who was this Neville character? A baby brother perhaps? And why exactly is your mother angry at you?
I'm a big fan of surprise/twisted endings (as is Arakun the Twisted Raccoon, and you really delivered with this!
Poor Neville. I'm sure you will miss him. *Laugh*
Great job, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and have a great day/evening/week!
PS-I'm returning those GPs to you. It was reward enough just to read this!

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