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 rain  [E]
how rain feels
by day--na
Review of rain  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "rain"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

I like this little piece. I like rain too-- but not too much.
You paint beautifully how rain feels. I like the self awareness quote which you have put here "some people feel the rain others just get wet." Yes, we should accept the things in life.

Your write has nice rhythm.

I can’t wait to read another story from you.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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