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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,

*Bulletg* TITLE:I like this poem about Tree. The title go well with the words.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY: You wrote beautifully the connection between a tree and life.

*Thumbsup* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone I found is cheerful and soothing.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully. This poem is not just about a tree, but also the feelings of you have when you are with it. I like the lines

“ The leafs are my self esteem, they are strength and dominance
I come here when I lack of it, it helps me with my confidence”

*Bulletg* THEME: I enjoy the scents, colors and sounds of the tree of your backyard.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.


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