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We Were Almost There!!!  [E]
A day at the beach
by LegendaryMask❤️
Review by Norbanus
Rated: E | (5.0)
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In the blink of an eye,
we soak up the blue sky
and picture the day at the beach

but there in the sand
as you walk hand in hand
we know joy is not out of reach

Outstanding, the way
you show us the play
of seagulls as they fly and teach
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