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| (4.5)| Dear Steven  ,I was happy to have you review something of mine and am visiting your writing as a member of WDC Angel Army to return the favor. This poem gave me so many feelings associated to how I perceived leaving home to live my own life in some crumby apartment eons ago. And just recently, my son enrolled in college over two hours away. I'm connected through him and your poem with its simply stated structure about how unnatural this new life feels. What's inspiring is the ending with this belief of adapting, the sensibility. Even more sensible, whether a partnership with another will help fortify the vision. It's more than the beginning of something, it's life altering. Having dreams of home life is an awakening from the brain that your life drastically changed. Must be brains (not as smart as they seem) are trying to decompress all these new computations and how it misses home and security while grasping the new life you've endeavored. All very relatable, and appreciable. A good write. Brian   4x minimum review characters for WDC recognition, less intro and salutation  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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