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Hi, Hullabaloo!
Interesting. I guess we need to pay more attention when we sign contracts for jobs, especially when you're going to be dealing with highly confidential information. Those damn big companies really are 'cut-throat' operations, aren't they?
Nice job with the prompt, and the dialogue was realistic and natural. But I'm not sure who I hate more, Lucas for doing the firing, or Fiona for doing his dirty work. Fiona's a killer, but Lucas is the coward who made her do his dirty work!
Comments and suggestions:
'The carpet was so thick that my sneakers were almost buried in the fibers' (nice description!)
Not my real feelings, I'm sure of that.(")
Kee ponw ritin gon, Hullabaloo! As always, thanks for entering the contest, and have a fantastic evening!

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