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 Mine  [E]
A small poem.
by Itsallpartoftheprocess
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"Mine" is a nice little poem which is very given shape by the poet Itsallpartoftheprocess. We apparently think about our identity which is almost wrong. We think that we may be identified through our face or through our colours or through our hair or teeth or lips or lashes. Even, some people think that they may be identified properly through their friends or lover or such many things whom they feel proud in real sense. Actually, all of these ideas are not true at all. Because of, not a single identification perception is permanent. They may be changed at any moment. Then what will be our real identity? This is the million dollars question.
We observed that all material identities are fake indeed. So, our real identity is something which is not a material one. What is this immaterial identity? This is nothing but we are the son children of God. This spiritual identity is rel because it can not be changed.
The poet comes to the root of our real identity but with the help of minimum words only. Undoubtedly, it is a awesome poetic work. Keep writing.

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