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Greetings, Dragonwoman!
As always, you've done another excellent job of throwing us a twisted/surprise ending when we least expect it! You did a good job using that prompt phrase (I'm not sure what exactly was so interesting that Rob had to send her to the bathroom, though), and adding that curveball in there where Lisa pretends to be the 'lady of the evening' that ultimately got Rob busted was a nice touch.
I guess even cops have a sense of humor. Whodathunkit?
The spelling and grammar was flawless (thank you!), and the whole piece read smoothly!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, have a great day, good luck in the contest, and congratulations on your promotion to Preferred Author!

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