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 | Tomorrow Now  [E] Could this be our ultimate fate?  |
| (4.5)| Greetings, Jdennis! Wow. This is something else. I had to read it twice, and to be honest, I'm still trying to let it soak in. The title is certainly a bit of a paradox, so I'm not sure if this is the future you're speaking about from yesterday (which would make it today?) or tomorrow as we see it from now.  If I'm correct, people are seeing this happening (our fate) from the inside of a ship as they watch those lines continuously scrolling down the monitors, which does indeed give it a futuristic feel. And then I believe the ship hits a wave, things go awry, and then then the ship, which at first the passengers thought would take them to a better, new future (or home), suddenly explodes. I know I'm way off with this, but that's how I see it. If you'd like to explain, I'd love to hear it! Your descriptions and words were excellent, as was the spelling and grammar, and your prose was great! And you seem to have one hell of an imagination! Nice job, my friend! It's a really good piece, but it's a little hard to absorb in one sitting, if you know what I mean! I kind of felt like I was on a mind-altering drug as I read it! Or maybe I NEED to be on one to get the gist of it!  Kee ponw ritin gon, Jdennis! Thanks for sharing this, and have a fantastic day! Oh, and congratulations on your promotion to Preferred Author! You look great in YELLOW!
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