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 "You only have to..."  [E]
"You only have to do this for me."
by Sheba
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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"You only have to..." is nice little writing skill which is shown by the writer Sheba. This not only very emotional but through this writing, the author wants to send an important religious message, too. It may be considered as a Flash Fiction. This writing fulfils all essential criteria which a Flash Fiction should have.
Here a lady is instructing the to change as she wished by which the author lost own faith ultimately. This should not happen in any material relationship. The relationship should be unconditional. Only then, the relationship becomes peaceful.
But in the religious aspect, You have to change yourself for the sake of God. All bad habits should be changed otherwise, God will never be happy.
This single Flash Fiction covers both aspects in a very smart way. Keep writing.

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