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 ”We Are Not Married!”  [E]
“She doesn’t like feeling like a wife.”
by Paul
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, Paul!
This is good. Different, but good. You certainly thought outside of the box using that prompt phrase this way, but it worked out well.
It also got me to wondering just how do animals communicate other than giving body signals? I guess they make certain noises, but is that really talking, per se?
Something to think about, anyway!
I like how did this all in dialogue, which is kind of strange since it deals with these not having any dialogue! *Laugh*
One tiny niggle:
"You are my partner. let’s eat!” (Let's)
Kee ponw ritin gon, Paul! Thanks for sharing this, good luck in the contest, and congratulations on your promotion to Preferred Author!

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