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 Eighteen Years  [E]
The Regret of Wasting Time
by Octavius
Review of Eighteen Years  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Octavius, and happy belated 6th 'birthday' on here!
I like this. I think most people reflect on their lives at some point and think of the time they might have wasted. I know I sure do! I'm at that point now where I have more days behind me that I do ahead of me, and sadly, going downhill is a lot faster than it was going uphill!
I'm no expert on poetry so I won't comment on the poetry part of this, other than I think it's good. But as I said, it's the subject that stood out to me.
My only suggestion would be to expand on this. I would have like to seen this done in decades, or at least more gradually, if you know what I mean. It starts great, but then you suddenly jumped from 20 + 4 to 70 + 10. I think that left a lot of things out that you could have shown you regretted doing.
But that's just my humble opinion.
Well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this! May you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC, and congratulations on your promotion to Preferred Author!

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