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Greetings, Hullabaloo22!
I thought this was pretty good for short flash fiction piece (I know you had a word limit), and I like how you used that prompt.
The fact that the cup and the dice were made of bone might have been a tip-off for some people that this game probably had some ominous curse to it, but apparently not for Kevin and Harry. Still, it was just a simple cup and dice, so what could be so alarming about that?
Just a shame that decided to take that one last turn. *Sad*
Great spelling and grammar, and that ending was great! I did NOT see that coming!
I don't know if you've played dominoes, but that game is known as bones! Perhaps if you ever decide to edit this you might want to change the game to that. Just a suggestion.
Well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Hullabaloo! Thanks for sharing this, and congratulations on your promotion to Preferred Author!

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