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Oh   [13+]
A love poem
by IE
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Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, IE!
I'm no expert on poetry, but I thought this was a beautiful free verse(?) piece about a lost loved one (right?), and you did a nice job of showing just how much this person meant to you. That part about how you've become a better woman for having known this person says a lot, and I totally agree; I believe that we take a little bit from everyone we meet in life who we get close to.
The reader can feel the love you had/have for him, as well as the pain of reaching out for him and knowing he's no longer there.
I was a tad confused with the 3rd stanza about it being 'just practice'. I know it makes sense to you, though, and that's all that counts.
Very well done, and very deserving of that ribbon!
Kee ponw ritin gon, IE! Thanks for sharing this, have a wonderful day, and congratulations on your promotion to Preferred Author!

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