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 "What do you think?"  [E]
A man finds peace in his own way
by Jon Faulken
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Jon Faulken!
For your very first piece on here, I thought this was really, really good! These 300 word flash fiction stories aren't easy for most—it's hard enough just to get a plot started—but you seem to have it down pat!
You did an excellent job with that prompt phrase, and it's actually a complete story, with good descriptions of the both the antagonist and protagonist, and a good ending. Not to mention that the spelling and grammar was flawless (thank you!).
Heck, you even managed to make it a little emotional too! *Shock2*
Very well done, my friend! Good luck in the contest, but I honestly don't think you'll need any! I'm willing to bet you have some (or a LOT) of writing in your background, and it shows.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Jon (PLEASE!), and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PPS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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