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Rated: GC | (4.5)
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Hello, Cat!
All morning whispering to yourself you wouldn't write any more political horror, eh? Well, I'm glad you did, and I think you are too since you won! Congratulations!
I thought this was good. The horror wasn't directly 'in your face', so to speak, but certainly implied and subtle. And if this was personally directed at one certain individual of an extremely prominent post, then I couldn't agree with you more! If it's the same one I'm thinking of, then I consider him the anti-Christ, and I'd also compare him to Hitler Benito Mussolini. And we know what happened to them!
Flawless spelling and grammar, but I did spot a couple of tiny typos:
"That's a woman's work, you know(." The) guard said. (," the)
"The country will be better when all the illegals are out of it."(.)
Otherwise, well done! And nice use of the prompt phrase!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Congratulations on the 'SCREAMS!!!' victory, and have a frighteningly fantastic week!


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