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 Moment  [E]
It’s time to choose.
by Jogan Writes
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Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello there, Jogan!
For only being 18 years old — you, not this piece *Laugh* — this is pretty good. It's obviously a way of looking at how we can deal with some of things (or decisions) that come up in our life, and I like how you showed both sides of what the possible repercussions might be if one were to indeed 'take the leap'.
This can actually affect a LOT of things we do in our lives. Strangely enough, the first thing that comes to MY mind is getting married! *Laugh* Isn't that one of the biggest 'leaps' a man has to take in his life?
Sorry, I digress.
Well done, my friend! The spelling and grammar was flawless, and you given some good advice. Just how good of advice it is will probably be judged by the ones who take it, though.
To leap, or not to leap? That is the question! *Rolling*
Kee ponw ritin gon, Jogan, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write (and you said you did in your port intro!), then you're going to love it here!
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PPS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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