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by A Guest Visitor
Review of Absentia  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! I found your story on at Read & Review. I'm with the WDC Angel Army. I enjoyed reading it and I hope you find this feedback useful. *Cool*


*Tackb* - Poetry:
The poem its self is perfect and I enjoyed reading it.


*Tack* - Hook:
What got me hooked was the way you written it.


*Tackb* - Style and Voice:
I like the style and the spaces between paragraphs is good.


*Tack* - Scene/Setting:
I can picture myself in a graveyard and I would cry over my dad.


*Tackb* - Characters:
No characters


*Tack* - Dialogue:
No problems with the dialogue.


*Tackb* - Grammar and Mechanics:
No issues with grammar


*Tack* - Suggestions:
Keep up with the writing and never give up.



Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!
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