Hello Luckie 🍀 ! This is your local and frolic like Sb here. I came across your item randomly and I'm reviewing for The Angel Army. Let's get rolling! Corrections/Suggestions First impressions- With your blog you could add an image, a little more information to the main page if you wanted to. I was excited that you have a blog! Blogging is my jam, and if you're interested in blogging prompts and communities I'm a part of a few. So, to name some awesome blogging communities here: "Blogging Circle of Friends " , "Blog City ~ Every Blogger's Paradise" and finally the one I try to do every month when I'm here is: "30-Day Bloggers Group" . What you're doing in your blog is just writing about your day, which is called just no prompts. Kind of like a catch-up and how I always used to journal before following prompts. Honestly, when it comes to the writing in your blog I didn't notice any typos or anything to fix. Your Blogging Voice You have a strong voice that definitely I can hear when I read your writing. It's quite pleasant, very direct, very assured of yourself if that makes sense. I've noticed that a lot of bloggers tend to be quite 'cut and dry' types that just state how it is and run with it. And, for me, that's personally how I write, talk, and like to read. Things Which I Enjoyed I really enjoyed seeing this look into your mind! Writing is fun with short stories and poetry because you get 'pieces' of the writer, so you can put it together like a puzzle. The blog seems to jump straight through that and directly to who is writing and what there day is like, what they think, what affects them and such. I think that is why I love blogging/journaling as much as I do. I also use it as an aid to go through my feelings and emotions and managing them. You do a great job tackling your subject, which is on friendships. It can be frustrating to contact someone then just hear radio silence. And I agree friendships are priceless. Overall Comments Overall, this is a great little look into your mind and how it ticks. I can understand the frustration of looking for help or guidance from a friend and then just hearing the radio silence on the other end. I agree that friendships are gold and should be treated as such, and I'm sorry about the disappointment you felt of the friendships not being what you give and not receiving the same. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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