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Review #4539609
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30 Day Blogging Detritus, March Edition  [E]
Finally! I've got something to write about besides my self-pity!
by trailerpark bodhisattva
         Review for entry/chapter: "day 24-5 years
Review by SB Musing
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello trailerpark bodhisattva !

This is your local and frolic like Sb here. I came across your item randomly and I'm reviewing for The Angel Army. Let's get rolling!

Corrections/Suggestions

*NoteW* First impressions- For the front part of your blog you can put down more about yourself if you want. Like how old are you? If you want to share, what got you into blogging, your favorite authors, what have you. Also, if you want to you can play with the formatting of your blog to have the entries be on the same page without clicking a link, but this is just a preference thing.

*NoteB* I don't have any other suggestions or fixing points to point out.

Your Blogging Voice *Pocketwatch*
You have a clear, concise, 'this is what it is' kind of voice. Which I appreciate because that's how I blog myself too. Take it, leave it, this is what may play out with my life or may not. I like the directedness of your voice and you are very easy to read. I can hear your voice well when I read your entry and you write very clearly.

How You Take on The Prompts *SnailV*
Your take on the prompt is the same as mine, basically, what will happen will happen. I do like how you say: I can point my actions in a direction and hope the rest of my life follows... That I think is what we are all trying to do with life right now. Point it in a direction, hope that it follows the intentions that we want to go through life, versus what it can do to us.

I personally don't have the self-discipline to work from home. Why homeschool was not a go for me, just ended up coding websites instead. So, planning your work and working your plan I can see that being hard.

*Heart*Things Which I Enjoyed
I really enjoyed coming across your blog because honestly, I love new bloggers in the community. The blogging community here is strong, supportive, and really wonderful. You do a good job of tackling the prompt and basically saying that five years is out of your control. But, the likely things that will line up within five years for you.

Overall Comments
Overall, this is a great little blogging space and I enjoyed coming across it. You could for your front page add an image, a title if you wish, and more information about who you are. I am glad you're a part of the 30 day blogging challenge with me. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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