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Review by SB Musing
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Hello HikerAngel !

This is your local and frolic like Sb here. I came across your item randomly and I'm reviewing for The Angel Army. Let's get rolling!

Corrections/Suggestions

*NoteW* First impressions- You are one of my fellow competitors within the 30 day blogging challenge. I was happy to come across your blog and had to review it since I love reading, reviewing, and commenting on blogs. For the main page I would say you could have an image to invite readers in if you wanted to. And, for this blog post you could expand on it if you wanted, or keep it the same.

*NoteB* Besides that, no typos or anything to point out for your post.

Your Blogging Voice *Pocketwatch*
I can tell that you have a sense of humor with your voice. Kind of like a tongue in cheek kind of tone if that makes sense. I could almost sense the smile behind answering the prompt and then doing a sort of mic drop for it. You make this quick, concise, so it was a fast and easy read.

How You Take on The Prompts *SnailV*
You write down some quick examples of where you aren't wishing but rather doing. They work as great examples for how you are making what you say you want to do: happen. I would say that you could expand on this a little more if you wanted to. Why do you feel like people are wishing instead of doing? Any examples in your life you could share that inspired this?

*Heart*Things Which I Enjoyed
I enjoyed that this was such a quick, easy, pleasant read. And funny as well, because I nodded my head at people wishing instead of doing. Which, reminds me, I need to make a 'do' list of things that I won't wish but I will pursue and tackle for myself. So, I enjoy that it is inspirational as well!

Overall Comments
Overall, this was an enjoyable little blogspace for me to come across and I was very happy to be able to read and review it for you. I know you will accomplish all that you intend to do for sure. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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