Hello Matthew Frederick !

This is your local and frolic like Sb here. I came across your item randomly and I'm reviewing for The Angel Army. Let's get rolling!

Corrections/Suggestions

First impressions- I really dig this opening page that you have and it gave me a great first impression of your blog. Us bloggers tend to do a quick little 'hey, I'm writing, please read?' but you have images, and a sense of humor to start things off.

I don't have any suggestions for you, you tackled the first impressions and your front page. I also like the title of your newest blog entry and that makes me want to read it as well.

Your Blogging Voice
This blog entry reads like a story with the amount of detail you have within it. Honestly, it has me slightly jealous about your ability to story tell so well and how you draw us into your morning and waking up. There's a white ceiling, things that talk to you, and a seizing up of muscles. All very exciting stuff! But all very mundane, which leads me to a second thing: the mundane can be quite profound with how you write it.

You are quite accomplished at making this mundane waking up of your day sound exciting. Almost like an Indian Jones movie. I was like, "where is he doing and what is he doing and what are these things that talk to him??"

Things Which I Enjoyed
I was living in a temporary default setting. My body reacted to the re-entry of my subjective consciousness. This little bit here, though there's a lot more I could highlight with your blog entry. It sounds like you had a muscle spasm or something of the sort that once you moved into a better position the muscle released from the hold it was in causing a pain-spasm-pain cycle. That's just me nerding out to say I think it was muscle related. But, I love you came up with this blog entry to explain it and all the detail you give us about it.

Also, that you live your life in constant curiousity, I love that. I feel the same and live the same way myself.

Overall Comments
Overall, this was a very cool blog to come across and I really enjoyed your descriptions you gave us. It read like a detailed 'show don't tell' story but in a blog entry if that makes sense. You have an enticing front page to your blog and it drew me right into it. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .