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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Lovely Image in March



Greetings Cinn !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" .
Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how, if you love each other, you don't need to be on top of each other all the time, or even in the same bed. Sleep is an important thing to get and snoring and sleep talking don't lend themselves to that in the other person. I say do whatever you need to in order to be rested. That's the voice of age talking, but it seemed to work! *Wink*

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part stays with me:

"I will rest
a smiling cheek on
the pillow and allow
my heart
to grow fonder overnight
because I can love you

from another room,
and there is intimacy

in separation."

Indeed, there is intimacy and even enhanced appreciation in separation.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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