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 What if I would tell you?  [18+]
My entry for the February Journey Through Genres contest is about saying the three words.
by Steve Joos
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Lovely Image in March



Greetings Steve Joos !

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" .
Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about falling in love when we are young and being unsure of what would happen. It's a scary thing to contemplate even through the prism of many years. You never know if you don't try.

This poem says young love to me and it's wonderful to read about all that anxiety and the nervous feelings that I still remember.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me).

You did that remarkably well with a fresh perspective.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

There are a lot of favorite parts, but this one stands out:

"It’s not like saying
I love the Cubs,
Or I love root beer,
But I love you.
Those words are beautiful.
Those words are scary.
They are words I want to say,
I need to say,
I have to say."

I understand the love of a baseball team, believe me. That's pretty deep and long lasting.

I thought this was wonderful.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

I also wish you a happy account birthday, but if this doesn't come to you in March, consider it a belated wish.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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