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 A lifelong journey   [13+]
A romantic poem
by Sumojo
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Lovely Image in March



Greetings Sumojo !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" .
Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about a long marriage that's full of love and adventures. This made me smile and think of my own marriage of more than 30 years now. A lifelong journey, to be sure. It's all part of the learning, loving and laughing, isn't it?

I particularly enjoyed your leaf imagery at the end.

Your title fits perfectly!

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*Oh, a lot of it rang a bell with me, but this part hit home:

"I’d run my fingers through your hair,
The hair that’s no longer there.
We’d travel far and wide
Just we two, side by side."

We traveled a lot to Ireland, that's why. He still has most of his hair, although it's white now instead of blond. You never know where that journey will take us.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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