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Lovely Image in March



Greetings concrete_angel!

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" .
Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*This is a poem about soulmates who meet each other at a very young age. Love only grows, despite forced absence and time apart. It is inspiring and a very moving theme as flight and planes figure prominently. Thus, the wonderful title.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part was very moving:

"She is twelve, and leaving. It lands: I love her
like fireworks and forever. I love her, and it doesn't matter.
An airplane takes her away, and the sky is no longer magical."

The sky is no longer magical. That is how it is with loss and when the heart knows what it wants at a very early age. We also lose some positive associations along the way. What was once magical is now irrevocably associated with the pain of the loss. But there can be a new day, too, as you prove here so eloquently.

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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