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Soulmates Transcend   [13+]
Remembering your love, and knowing it will always be. A Sonnet.
by intuey
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Lovely Image in March



Greetings intuey !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" .
Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought of enduring love that leaves one with lasting and comforting memories. Love outlasts life. That is the message of the title and one that inspires and comforts as one struggles to carry on.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me). Your use of language to convey feelings and cherished memories is remarkable.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part stays with me, particularly the last line:

"Honeysuckle-laced breeze kisses my cheek,
reminiscent of the petal-soft taunts
shared between us down by the crooked creek.
A place my memory forever haunts."

To say that memory haunts a place (and not the other way around) is a brilliant turn of language. Why shouldn't that be so. Makes lovely sense to me!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do after I read everything, then reread and think about it some. But, in the end, it's just one opinion here from a fellow writer.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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