Your Embrace [13+] Journey Through The Genres entry - Romantic Poetry |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! HAPPY 7th WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Greetings 💙 Carly ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? I thought about feeling safe with the one that we love. We find our solace and our home in the arms of someone who cares so much and who we care for. Everything ties back to the title and feeling secure in one's love's embrace. When reading poetry, I look for lines that are memorable and stay with me. I certainly found that here in your conclusion. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? This part was particularly moving: "Together we rise above And our love endures Burning bright In a world prone to darkness." In the darkest times, the imagery of darkness - that's when we know we are loved. Expressing all that someone means to us is a difficult task, but you have done it well. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps My reviews are reactions to what I have read and not meant to be harsh critiques. I tell you how I connected with the writing, from my point of view - which is very subjective. I think that all poetry is subjective and it's how well the writer connects to the reader that really matters in the long run. I could not begin to dissect writing that comes straight from the heart, as it does here. Well done! My review was written and stored in my review tool on March 7, 2020. It will be sent out when winners are announced and we judges are instructed to send out our reviews. If that is after March, please accept my belated account anniversary wishes! Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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