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Review #4540544
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 Love's Rose  [13+]
To Grandma Mary and Grandpa Frank
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review of Love's Rose  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Lovely Image in March



Greetings Prosperous Snow celebrating !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought of a love that stood the test of time. I thought of true romance as being something to hold on to and that endures throughout the trials of life's journey.

This is a lovely tribute to beloved and admired grandparents.

I think that poetry is such a personal thing so my reviews are my reactions to what you have shared. This certainly hit a chord with me as both sets of my grandparents and my parents were married a long long time. Free verse is a wonderful vehicle for communicating in a succinct and moving way.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"Love's rose grows
among the thorns of everyday life."

Here, you tie the enduring love to the imagery of the title very well. This lovely poem proves you do not have to have a lot of words to say a great deal and to move your audience. Holding on to that rose, to what is good is an inspiring way to go forward.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

My reviews are not meant to be harsh editing forays or critiques. It is my reaction and response to what I have read that I attempt to share with you. You did some fine work here and I was moved as I read and reread.

I reviewed your poem on March 7, 2020 and stored it in my review tool. It will be sent out when we are told to do so, as the winners are announced.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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