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  |  | Wheel of Fortune  [18+] My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, ridinghood! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" .  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked  I've always enjoyed your writing and many times I learn from it. You have a special way with your words--a tone which pulls me in. I loved the nature in this piece: the mention of the ducks, the rippling pond, etc.Suggestions/Thoughts & Comments I have a feeling this is way over my head. I'm confused but don't want to be because your words are quiet and soothing and I'd like to understand this more than what I do. I'm sure there is symbolism here. I looked up the name "Sybylla", which means prophet, but still am not clear. In Paragraph 5: to the shelf of shelf of sand did you mean to repeat the word shelfFinal Thoughts Like I stated before, I've always enjoyed the quietness and soothing tone of your writing. Forgive me for my confusion. I'm just feeling better from a two-week bout of whatever is going around other than Covid-19.  Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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