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From Red to Purple  [18+]
A Prince Challenge Writing Contest Entry
by Mastiff
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Mastiff! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" . *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Especially Liked

         *Bullet* The tone of your writing makes it easy to read through to the end. I sometimes find it difficult to plow through pieces with no dialogue, but I found no difficulty at all with your piece.

         *Bullet* I liked that you still connect Little Red Corvette with the red-headed girl you'd talked to at the club. I connect a lot with music and many times a tune from the past takes me back to a younger self, along with the feelings I felt back then. It's kind of weird how it does that, sort of a blast from the past. Sometimes they are good feelings and sometimes, vibes I'd like to forget! *Laugh*


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* Paragraph 5: I'd lived many placed, Just a silly little typo: I'd lived many places,

          No other typos or grammar issues stood out. *Smile*


Final Thoughts

         Great job with following the contest prompt and rules. Best of luck in the contest!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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