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 You have a weakness  [E]
A warzone made of advertisements
by Jam.R.
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"You have a weakness" is a very nicely written poem by the poet Jam.R.. The poet wants to explain that our life is a nothing but a warzone and we are the warriors of the battlefield of the life. Sometimes, our some strength become the source of our weakness, too. For example, suppose you love somebody, we can not take any tough step against that person inspire of the enmity of him/her. So, this love becomes your weakness. Even, this weakness may be exploited brutally from other end. In the same way, you are limited so often through your good qualities. It happens in life though we should not reject those qualities. We must apply these qualities for the sake of mankind.
This poem is written wonderfully. Keep writing.

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