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 All about Irene  [E]
Flash fiction with the words: Paper, Brick, Stolen
by mxnasi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a superbly written Flash Fiction "All about Irene" is! This Flash Fiction is very nicely written by mxnasi. Most importantly, this story fulfils all the characteristics which an ideal Flash Fiction should have. This is a story about twin sisters. It is steadily towards the end with a smoothnes. We can not imagine what will happen next until the end comes in front of us.
One of the twin sisters is murderer but other one is honest. But, police did not identify the difference. They arrest false person but she did not complain for this mistake. Not only that, she was happy as she is able to save her sister. Even, in reality, it happens. The innocent punishes whereas crime does not pay. But, fortunately, it happens in rare and unintentionally.
Nice and compact writing style. Keep writing.


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