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She Said...  [E]
She said...what?
by Joy
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"She Said..." is a nicely written poem by our honourable senior moderator and poet Joy. This is one of the best poems ever I read. Though subject of the poem is not very easy one but due to artistic and efficient writing style, the readability of this poem becomes awesome.
The efficiency level starts from his Title. This title increases our inquisitiveness. What did she say? The title creates the suspense.
She confirmed that she did not not know him. But that man know that this is not true at all. Because his heart is listening her voice since a long ago. So, her voice is very much known to him. The poet uses some shambolic words very appropriately. One is 'caverns' and other is 'sun'. Actually, she lives inside his heart. Here, the heart is compared with cave where as the word sun indicates bright secred light. At the end, we able to know that the lady is her mother. So, the bright light is nothing but her affection which is known that as most secred thing in our material world.
This is wonderfully written. Write on.

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