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 The mind  [13+]
Remember, mind
by Rebecca
Review of The mind  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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"The mind" is a nice little poem which is written by using minimum number of syllables but poet writes the poem very clearly as well as smartly. The poet is
none other than Roxxie.
Most importantly, the title is accurate which is able to set our focus into a big building, inside us called mind.
We often listen some recalls from our past but tragedy is according to situation, we can not opt the positive mode though our heart wants otherwise.
This is marvellously written poem with a lot of efficiencies involving in it which actually shows a darker side in our life. Keep writing.

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