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Review #4552326
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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "~ Blogging in June ~" 
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Greetings, ruwth! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" . *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* Well, you hooked me right away with I live in a dilapidated house. I want to know more! You mention you lived in normal homes before now, so I'm interested in more details. *Wink*

         *Bullet* I like your honesty so far. I'm looking forward to reading more!

         *Bullet* This could be the beginning of a story, Ruwth! A perfect setting to reel the reader in. You could use this whole experience (like they say, Write what you know) to create a story or even a biography. *Smile*


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* My only suggestion is to continue with this. *Smile* It's allowed in this contest, I'm pretty sure (though it's always best to double check. *Wink*)


Final Thoughts

         Let me know if you finish this. I'd absolutely love to read more!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
Cubby ")
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