%%USERNAME%%    %%ACCWORDS%% %%ONOFF%% |
 Review #4555640 |
  |  | Prompted by Poet's Place Cafe  [E] Inspired by challenges at Poet's Place Cafe, a forum designed to hone your writing skills.  |
| (5.0)  Greetings, tinker111! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" .  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked  It sure feels like summer in this piece! What a great time I had feeling the splash of water in the pool, eating sweet watermelon, smelling that corn on the cob dripping with butter, hearing the cicada's singing and being mesmerized by the fireflies! And so much more. Sounds like a summer day in my own childhood, except I might add hearing the radio crackling in the background with a Tiger baseball game playing, broadcasted by Ernie Harwell. Swing and a miss! Sterrrike three! Aw, thanks for bringing back some lovely childhood memories for me, Tink.  Suggestions to Consider I have absolutely no suggestions! Final Thoughts Love the imagery, along with all the senses you use. Lovely piece! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
|
|||
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
My review has been submitted for consideration in "
You responded to this review 06/26/2020 @ 1:25am EDT