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 Chinese Navy is rapidly getting big   [E]
Chinese Navy is rapidly moving to global capabilities.
by mizan720
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi mizan720,
This is a fantastic article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. You have written about a fascinating country. I anxiously began to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the implications of a growing Chinese Navy. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the
article tedious. You use a formal, organizes style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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